The past is gone, it disappeared; the future has not arrived, only the present is with us. There he is, sad,alone,wondering how life is escaping, recalling those days in which he was happy,erasing the moments he did not enjoy...
"I want to become a child again" were his last words.
By Lorena Prieto
It's a beutiful story!!All people want to be a child!!the story has a attractive tittle.
ReplyDeleteI remembered me when I was a child and think "I would like to be a child and become my life"
good microstory! At no time I could not imagine the final..!
ReplyDeleteDavid Martin
I like this story because it has a attractive tittle and I think that it makes us laugh.
ReplyDeleteMARY LUZ SÁNCHEZ
I loved this story ... Why? I think everyone at some point in our lives we've thought about being a child again, to live like them, no worries, radiant with happiness... I liked it.
ReplyDeleteIt´s a story that happened to me, and that usually happens to people. Take stock of what happened and miss good of the past. Also it has an attractive title. I like it so much.
ReplyDeleteIt´s a nice story!
ReplyDeleteThe first sentence makes think about the pace of the life. Probably everybody would like to be a child again and start his life without mistakes.
So, I think that we can get a lesson of that: make the most of our lives.
Lucía Enríquez López
I like this story because i think that everybody consider go back this one time in her life, change things that belong to the past.
ReplyDeleteRocío Labrador Toledo
I like this story because I think that everybody has ever had this kind of thought, specially when we look the difficulties of being adult. In fact, sometimes, in spite of being adults we miss being children.
ReplyDeleteHello! I like your story, because it makes you think, makes us realize how fast time goes on . It is a nostalgic story and it's amazing when he says: "were his last words" because I understand he was about to die and remembers how happy he was when he was a child and how quickly it has spent his life.
ReplyDeleteIt works! Congratulations!
Elsa Castillo