He had trained so much for that match. It was being difficult, but he needed to win.
Suddenly, everything turned off. There had been a short circuit and the match had disappeared. Angrily, he took off the Wii remote control from his right arm. Then, the one from his left arm, and went to sleep.
By Irene Fernández
I think it's a very funny story with an unexpected ending that makes you want to reread the story. The story is set in an activity that can be familiar.
ReplyDeletePatricia Soto
The title of the story allows me to anticipate which will be the storyline.
ReplyDeleteThe story is very well described. I could feel his need to win and that the end of the story is unexpected given more excitement.
It's a funny story because you can feel all the frustration and need that the main character has to win what seems an important final and at the end you realize that this is only a game of Wii.
Lucía Viso Troyano
It manages to defeat my expectations because at the begining i thought that it was a real game and at the end it is only a game of Wii. I like it so much, because you describe all detais very good so i can see the story in my head. It´s a funny story and it allows us to look at daily life of much of young people!
ReplyDeleteThis story is very funny. I identify with the character. The last weekend I was playing with some friends with the Wii and my control ran out of batteries. Everyone had high scores except me. All of us laughed a lot.
ReplyDeleteI like the story because it has an unexpected ending.
Good work!