Saturday, May 5, 2012

Sleep

 I looked up and I saw a wonderful book. Suddenly, I was going for a walk in a beach. A great wave was carrying me out to sea. When I opened my eyes, I was sitting on an elephant, in India.
"Max, wake up! We have to do the history assignment."
I waked up very scared, I didn´t know where I was. I thought that I should sleep some more.
By Sara Carretero

4 comments:

  1. Lucía Viso TroyanoMay 5, 2012 at 5:34 PM

    The story has an interesting title. It provides to the reader with a lot of information in only one word.
    It is also exciting because the story allows me to travel to different places.
    The storyline plays with two different interpretations. At first it seems that the main character is reading and finally I think that everything is a dream.
    The ending is surprising. Everything that happens in the story is a dream.

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  2. I like the story because you think he is reading a book of different stories where he goes to the beach and then to India but finally he weak up and he has to do much homework. It has a surprising ending that it helps to know, everything is a dream and he falls asleep while he did his assignment.

    Gema García

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  3. A funny storie, makes us smile because i think everybody has lived a situacion like that at least once.
    Almudena Otero

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  4. It is a good story! I like it because I think it is a wonderfull dream, he sleeps and dream with the beach, the elephant in India... I think that everyone like a nice dream. And then when you wake up you thing: oh my god! where am I? Is it really?

    Andrea Martín

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