She spoke with her mother, "He is perfect for me," she said while
she was buying an expensive dress.
"He gives me everything I want, I
don´t need more."
A dark day,
she realized she was wrong. He was not giving all - love was missing.
By Marta Prados
I think that it's a very real history that can happen a many people, because it's not easy to realize that the only thing that matters in life are not material things but the love of people.
ReplyDeletePatricia Soto
I agree with Patricia. It´s a very good story. Lots of people can feel the same that the character. I think this is the strong point of this story, the empathy.
ReplyDeleteLaura Paz
I think that also the empathy and the reality are the main goals in this microfiction. But I'm not sure if the girl with many presents was happy with him. On the other hand the microfiction is short but understandable. Good job!
ReplyDeleteGood story. It makes us think in the importance of love in relationships. Nowadays many people only look for the money and not the correct person. A big mistake.
ReplyDeleteFrom my point of view this story is very nice,
ReplyDeleteI like it because I thing this situation is real, and every people, especially women we have been, specifically sometimes in my.
From my point of view this story is very nice,
ReplyDeleteI like it because I thing that this situation is real, especially in women, and especifically sometimes in my.
Andrea Martín
This story seems very interesting because it makes you think. Some people give value to money that has their partner but leave out the love that is the most important in a relationship. Without love the relationship will break
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