Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Loneliness

During dinner at an expensive restaurant she, without saying a word, was listening to her future husband talking about his business. "My mother says he's the perfect man for me" she thought. A few hours later, she lay in her bed. Finally, she felt affection, warmth, comfort, welfare and protection. He was hugging her pillow.


By Melissa García

5 comments:

  1. I think that this story has an absurd humor and also it has an ironic point and a little surprise at the end, Ilike it.

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  2. In my opinion, this story is very ironic and has a surprise. The gender is absurd humor.


    Beatriz Martín Herrero

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  3. DAVID NEVADO AZOFRAMay 3, 2012 at 12:57 PM

    hahahhaha, i like your story, i liked the ironic and surprise ending.

    I like storys about absurd humor, your story is very very good. Congratulations!

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  4. Alicia García SáezMay 5, 2012 at 1:08 PM

    This story is very good, because it makes you laugh, and I honestly don´t think this will be the end ... the story is ironic, but very striking when reading it.

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  5. I think that It allows us to look at daily life of some couples. It is a good story with a lot of ironic.
    I like it!

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