“Victoria? – he called her.” Nobody answered. He couldn’t turn on the lights. What was that viscous substance? Who was lying on the floor? Victoria was standing in front of him, however she was on the floor surrounded by blood too! Hands were choking him. He struggled to get away from them, until he saw his attacker… His own face?
By Virginia de la Fuente
I like this story because it is mysterious and it manages to defeat or expectations. When I read this story I wanted to know the ending of it to know what would happen with Victoria, but I will never know it.
ReplyDeleteI need to know the end, please
Congratulations Virginia.
Carla Corrochano
I liked your story, because you describe the scene shortly and you do not specifically explain what happens, so the viewer must strive to interpret ... overdose? ... suicide?
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion this is a good story that speaks about "victory". I think it has a moral about if all things are lawful to achieve the victory.
ReplyDeleteThis story has a final sentence that makes you think that the protagonist is himself, his own enemy...to seek success and victory at any price.