I woke up feeling something
strange, some soreness. I could not move, with scratches and a headache that didn’t
let me think. I suddenly started having flashes. What had happened last night?
A bad dream?
I turned on the television to relax, just bad news came, one of them surprised me the most, it was a weird one that happened near my house. Another flash came to me suddenly, streets, shops, bars,... amazed by the coincidences with the event, it scared me. A bad dream?
By Cristina Ceña
The strength of the story is its open end. The author lets you decide the end with your imagination. You can decide that only the main character has had a nightmare or on the other hand that he caused an accident or a fight.
ReplyDeleteThe story does not give me many details about what happened last night but I supose that the main character was involved in a fight or an accident because he has scratches.
This type of finish is very exciting because it gives the reader a very important role in history.
Lucía Viso Troyano.
This story works because of the imagination, was it a dream? Did I did?, Engages the reader and makes the character's feelings are very realistic and I imagine that man with headaches, marks on the face from blows ...
ReplyDeleteIt is very intriguing, I like it !
Mar López González