So much pain, suffering and control. She is unable to stand it even one more second. She denies; it is unnecessary, she doesn't deserve this. How long does she have to endure it? She makes a decision: she manages to stop laughing and yells “Stop tickling me!”
By Judit de Ancos
I think it's a story with an unexpected ending, because you think that the protagonist is suffering when in fact she is being tickled. I think the title is well chosen.
ReplyDeletePatricia Soto
Congratulations for your prize!
ReplyDeleteI agree with the added comment to your funny story!
Firstly, it has a powerful final phrase, which changes absolutely all expectations created about the story! “Stop tickling me!” is a successful close.
Secondly, I think that the title is very attractive "Enough is enough" I can suppose that the story will deal with the ending of an irritable and unfair situation, for example a violent fight.
Finally, the main topic of the story allows me to look at a familiar situation in a new light, when a moment of delight turns into a kind of torture? The answer is clear, depends of the ability of endure.
In conclusion, based on the assessment criteria, your story has a lot of them; therefore, I consider that it has been an extraordinary reading. Thanks!
Mª Ángeles Moya Heras
Thank you so much MªÁngeles
DeleteWhat can I say? Congratulations, of course, and I was surprised by your story. At first, you think the main character is being tortured, or maybe she is having a tough time in her life... And it's true, but you don't expect someone is tickling her. When you start to read your story you think it will be sad, however the end makes you smile. Good story!
ReplyDeleteVirginia de la Fuente
I like this story!, When i started to read this story i could imagine someone had happened the worst things! but just was tickling.
ReplyDeletethis story defeated my expectation.
Congratulation. It's funny.
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